Separating from a cord, the first breath breathed.
Interpreting tension in reigns as parental commands, a childhood instinct controlled.
Getting a 'rakhi' tied, a promise renewed.
Exchanging bands, a friendship reassured. [5]
Tying a 'kalava' from a puja, a religion embraced.
Making new knots and undoing old ones, a superstition continued.
Tying a 'kalava' from a puja, a religion embraced.
Making new knots and undoing old ones, a superstition continued.
Struggling like an animal on a leich, in captivity toiled.
Dancing like puppets on a string, an authoritarian obeyed.
Soaring high like kites on strings, a passionate dream pursued. [10]
Cutting a ribbon, an endeavor inaugurated.
Abstaining from 'no-strings-attached' sort of relationships, a self worth realized.
Merely stringing and unstringing instruments in hesitation, a conversation deferred.
'Tying the knot', a lifetime committed,
Wearing beads on a string to manifest that commitment, a trust instilled, [15]
And winding a spool around a tree out of that trust, a tradition sustained.
And winding a spool around a tree out of that trust, a tradition sustained.
Passing along life's secret code on molecular strings, a parenthood dawned.
'Tying loose ends' before we 'leave this place', an unexamined life reflected upon.
Strings. So much of life is in these strings! [20]
In tangling and getting tangled in mortal quandaries,
In resolving dilemmas like knots in neglected hair,
In trust, the kind of trust -
a gymnast has on her Mallakhamb rope,
a dangling spider has on its silky string, [25]
In hope -that not all 'strings' start and end in our two hands
but that there is someone at the 'other' end -
a parent, a sibling, a friend, a God, a belief,
a boss, a dream, a milestone, a life partner [30]
Some like colorful embroidery decorating the fabric of life,
Others weaving into our midnight's slumber, plucking strings of unrest;
but each one making it worthwhile to hold on patiently to all those STRINGS!
Others weaving into our midnight's slumber, plucking strings of unrest;
but each one making it worthwhile to hold on patiently to all those STRINGS!
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Notes:
non-Indians - [4] look up Rakshbandhan & [6] Kalava
[13] comes from Tagore's poem Waiting
Notes:
non-Indians - [4] look up Rakshbandhan & [6] Kalava
[13] comes from Tagore's poem Waiting
"The song I came to sing
remains unsung to this day.
I have spent my days in stringing
and in unstringing my instrument. "
[14-16] An Indian marriage/related customs...
[14-16] An Indian marriage/related customs...
[15] beads on a string = 'MangaLasutra' (मंगळसूत्र/தாலி) in case you didn't catch that.
[16] alluding to the Maharashtrian vat-purnima custom
[17] DNA, of course.
[24] Malla-khamb - link for your viewing pleasure (& for me to reminisce my childhood!!)
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I'm sure you can think of many more strings - tangible ones from computer science, physics, medicine, music, and many more philosophical ones. Try contributing in a format consistent with parts of the poetry, when time permits (?!) Better yet, what is your definition of a String? :P
Any comments/critique welcome :-) Thanks for reading!
Any comments/critique welcome :-) Thanks for reading!
Some strings crossed, some boundaries scored, nation rejoices.
ReplyDeleteAlso after line [25]
a violinist has on the strings
I do not know whether my lines suit your flow of ideas, but still.
It was another great post indeed. Its great to see how much you have reflected on the various aspects of life.
A pair of ropes for a tree climber, altitudes achieved*
ReplyDeleteTying a knot around the knees, futility demonstrated**
Tension of the bow string, a meal earned for the hunter
In tug of war, in falling 'back' to win, a few lessons learnt (Courtesy - Arnab above)
*Coconut/Palm etc tree climbers use two strings (sometimes one/none), one to tie their ankles together, and the other around the body and in a few contortions and frog jumps can climb a 50-80 ft tree in seconds. (Highly dangerous but their skill is a treat to the eyes)
**Crude translation of "muzhangalukkum (knee) mottai (tonsured) thalaikkum (head) mudichu (knot)" a knot will inevitably slip if you attempt at those two places (often mistakenly understood as a knot between the knee and the head :P)
Arnab - with cricket on our minds, the line is awesome! & thanks for the last comment :)
ReplyDeleteBala - Thanks for reading & contributing. I esp like the futility line lol!